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Social Studies 30 Diploma Examination: Summary of Scores and Scoring Descriptors
DimensionExceptional (5)Proficient (4)Satisfactory (3)Limited (2)Poor (1)
Defence of PositonThe defence of position is based on convincing and logical arguments.
Case studies and/or examples have been carefully chosen.
There is a strong relationship between the case studies and/or examples chosen and the position taken. The arguments presented are consistent and forceful, demonstrating originality, maturity, and insight.
The defence of position is based on well considered arguments. Case studies and/or examples have been well chosen. There is a clear relationship between the case studies and/or examples chosen and the position taken. The arguements presented are logical and clearly defined.The defence of position is based on one or more adequate arguments. Appropriate case sudies and/or examples have been chosen. A relationship between the case studies and/or examples chosen and the position taken has been established. While the arguments are generally sound, they may lack somewhat in persuasiveness.The defence of position is based on emotion and/or simple assertions than on logic and/or the arguments presented are confused, contradictory, vague, and/or lack development. Case studies and/or examples are related to the issue but may be unrelated to the position taken. The relationship between the case studies and/or examples and the position taken may be hard to determine.The defence of position is weak: i.e. a position is hard to determine OR little or no attept has been made to defend the position taken. Case studies and/or examples may be inappropriate to the position. There is little or no relationship drawn between the examples and/or case studies chosen and the position taken.
Discussion of value positionsThe discussion of the alternative value positions is thoughtful and reveals an insightful understanding of the choices inherent in the issue.The discussion of the alternative value positions reveals a clear understanding of the issue. Some of the critical features of these positions are identified.The discussion of the alternative value positions reveals an adequate understanding of the issue.The discussion of the alternative value positions reveals an uncertain or vague understanding of the issue. The value positions may not be clearly related to the issue.Two or more alternative value positions may not be indicated or the discussion of alternative positions is minimal. An inaccurate or incomplete understanding of the issue is demonstrated.
Presentation of Examples or Case StudiesThe examples or case studies selected are relevant, accurate, and comprehensively developed, revealing a mature and insightful understanding of social studies content.The examples or case studies selected are relevant, accurate, and clearly developed, revealing a good understanding of social studies content.The examples or case studies selected are relevant and adequately developed, but may contain some factual errors. The development of the case studies/examples reveals an adequate understanding of the social studies content.The examples or case studies selected, while relevant, are vaguely or incompletely developed, and/or contain inaccuracies, revealing a restricted understanding of social studies content.The examples or case studies selected are relevant, but a minimal attempt has been made to develop them and/or the examples or case studies contain major errors revealing a lack of understanding of social studies content
Quality of Language and ExpressionThe content is organized in such a way that the writer's meaning is unquestionably evident. The expression reveals a mature and controlled use of language including correct convention, effective syntax, and precise and specific vocabulary.The content is organized in such a way that the writer's meaning is clear. The expression reveals effective use of language including correct conventions and appropriate syntax and accurate vocabulary.The content is organized in such a way that the writer's meaning is generally clear. The expression reveals an adequate use of language, including correct conventions. Syntax may be awkward, and vocabulary over-generalized.The content is organized in such a way that the writer's meaning is vague or unclear. The expression reveals a lack of assurance in conventions, syntax, and vocabulary.The content is disorganized or leaves in doubt the writer's meaning. The expression reveals serious faults in conventions, syntax, and vocabulary.